Research Question:
- How does Demetrio Macias' leadership reflect that of Pancho Villa in the Mexican Revolution?
Thesis Statement:
- In the book "The Underdogs" by Mariano Azuela, Demetrio Macias is a very influencial commander in the Mexican Revolution and he reflects Pancho Villa's leadership in many different ways; both their families were tried to be abused from by state federals, they both became strong revolutionary leaders which made a difference although they had a desire to kill and to be a part of battles.
Can a thesis be more than one sentence? I tried to jamm as many thing I could in the thesis although I would like to talk about more.
Good question. I would recommend simplifying the thesis then explaining the various ways Macias is a literary representation of Villa throughout the paper.
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